Mind Desert - First M01 Track

[D A Payne]

M01 Track Mind Desert:

http://soundcloud.com/soundd-1/mind-desert

[UncleBibby]

As an atmospheric kind of song, like they use for horror movies and scary videogame levels, I think it's great, very effective, but as a song on its own the notes seem almost random in their placement (for the stringed instrument at least). I look forward to your next song for sure, but you might want to try making a melody that's a little more, well, melodic. I like this a lot though, no doubt about that.