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WarpToken
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Forever Future Forever

Post by WarpToken » Sat Jun 19, 2010 9:52 pm

I submit my newest tune for your consideration! I like comments!

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/warptoken/forever-future-forever[/soundcloud]

You may need to DL this one...Soundcloud is muffing up the bass a lil bit.
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Re: Forever Future Forever

Post by trnsprnt » Wed Jun 23, 2010 10:27 am

Really good. My only suggestion is to make that bass used at the end and in some other parts bigger. I Think it would benefit from some vibrant bass. Anyway it's great. You guys work at the speed of light.

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Re: Forever Future Forever

Post by Syscrusher » Wed Jun 23, 2010 3:19 pm

Love the opening! I like the part right before the halftime 2:30-3:00. Very neat little melodies tucked in there.
Nice work.

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Re: Forever Future Forever

Post by Decktonic » Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:04 pm

I really like the melody and all the various sounds going on, but I think the problem is that some of the sound effects are either peaking too hard or are just too distorted because they seem to drown out the rest of the song (especially when it sounds like a rocket is taking off). It's a very good track but bringing the bass and drums out more and getting the different parts balanced will make it better :)
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Re: Forever Future Forever

Post by WarpToken » Wed Jun 23, 2010 11:40 pm

...I actually thought the bass/kick was too loud...and I was going to re-do them.

I'll mess with the SFx levels too.

Thanks for the input.
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Re: Forever Future Forever

Post by WarpToken » Thu Jun 24, 2010 3:58 am

Okay...does this sound any better??

http://jaguar.holyoak.com/music/Forever ... ermix2.mp3
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Re: Forever Future Forever

Post by Decktonic » Thu Jun 24, 2010 12:11 pm

YES! 10x better. This sounds GREAT. One last suggestion: that last slow pattern, I really felt like it should repeat once. So 3:38 to 3:46 plays one more time, and then the part at 3:46 is the ending after that.

Otherwise this is solid!
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